Talk:Marco Tronchetti Provera/Archive 1

Suggestion for the reorganisation of the entry

Hello everybody,

I'd like to suggest a new order of the information in this entry (updating it). I'm quite new to Wikipedia, therefore I don't know whether this is considered a massive change or not, that's why I am proposing my idea here in the Talk page. Here below, you find in bold the changes I have been thinking of (just to show the changes, I won't use it on the body of the entry), while the number in brackets point out the corresponding references, to be found at the end of the passage.

I thank in advance anyone who will help advising me on how to proceed! --Ema vinadio (talk) 08:04, 11 September 2014 (UTC)

" Marco Tronchetti Provera [...] of the Group in 1992.

At present, he is Chairman and Chief Executive Officer of Pirelli & C. S.p.A (1), and Chairman of the holding Marco Tronchetti Provera & C. S.p.A., which he controls and up to December 2013 he was also chairman of Camfin S.p.A, the main shareholder in Pirelli & C. S.p.A. (2) He is Deputy Chairman of the Board of Mediobanca (3), a member of the executive committee of Italian industrialists' association Confindustria (4) and sits on the International Advisory Board of insurance company Allianz (5). He is also on the Steering Committee of Assonime (6) and Assolombarda.

Alongside his corporate [...] Trilateral Commission.

In the past, while maintaining his roles [...] of Telecom Italia S.p.A. (September 2001 to September 2006)."

(1) http://www.pirelli.com/corporate/en/about_us/management/default_Tronchetti.html

(2) http://www.gruppocamfin.it/inglese/pag3.asp

(3) - (4) http://www.mediobanca.it/en/consiglio-amministrazione/marco-tronchetti-provera.html

(5) http://investing.businessweek.com/research/stocks/people/person.asp?personId=3289419&ticker=PC:IM

(6) http://www.assonime.it/AssonimeWeb2/sito.jsp?id=232328

Good morning,

I have eventually edited the changes I had proposed here above, following the advice I was given by editor Yunshui, who answered to my request for help through the help me template. I am happy to discuss this further with anyone who is interested (it would help me improving my editing skills).

Have a nice day, --Ema vinadio (talk) 08:22, 19 September 2014 (UTC)

PR piece

A quick look at the Italian page shows that this article is a PR piece. This man has had so many court cases etc. This page is that of a hero. A PR piece. I added that he was married to the owner's daughter. OneEuropeTwoEuropes (talk) 17:56, 12 July 2015 (UTC)