Talk:Matt Striebel/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 23:51, 29 October 2010 (UTC)

I'll review this one (and hopefully the others) tonight. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 23:51, 29 October 2010 (UTC)

Here's the issues:

• "when his sister introduced him to the Brine Lightning stick." huh? introducing someone to a stick gets them involved in lacrosse?
  • Fixed, I think.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:56, 30 October 2010 (UTC)
• "owner of Indoor Action Sports, in Greenfield, MA." write out Massachusetts.
  • Fixed and linked.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:48, 30 October 2010 (UTC)
• "Striebel began his career in the leagues inaugural" league's
  • Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:49, 30 October 2010 (UTC)
• "in Bridgeport, CT" as above.
  • Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:50, 30 October 2010 (UTC)

Article on hold. This is probably the last one I'll review because I can tell I'm getting burnt out on reviewing, let alone on reviewing very similar people repeatedly. Trying to push since there's few reviewers right now. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:02, 30 October 2010 (UTC)

Looks good now, GA passed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:07, 30 October 2010 (UTC)