Talk:Mr. India (1987 film)/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:11, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 22:11, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead[edit]
- No issues with the non-free use rationale.
- Is there no secondary source for the runtime?
- This BBFC link will direct you to a 1988 film of the same name, but the cast is entirely different. So, it must be a different film. I use the version that was provided on YouTube, you can search it by yourself if you want to see it. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:31, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
- The link --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:13, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
- This BBFC link will direct you to a 1988 film of the same name, but the cast is entirely different. So, it must be a different film. I use the version that was provided on YouTube, you can search it by yourself if you want to see it. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:31, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
- "The film's principal photography, which was handled by Baba Azmi, was shot in" → "Principal photography, handled by Baba Azmi, took place in"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:59, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
Plot and cast[edit]
- Plot is under 700 words so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
- Remove the comma after "ends meet".
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:09, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
- Add a serial comma after "Seema, Calendar".
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:09, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
- No issues with #Cast.
Production[edit]
- "consisting Salim Khan" → "consisting of Salim Khan"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
- "given with the role" → "given the role"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
- Remove the hyphen between "future-wife".
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
- "choreographer and action director" → "choreographers and action directors"
- I have added respectively. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
- "character become invisible" → "character invisible"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
- Recite sources at the end of each quote per WP:QUOTE.
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
- Everything thing else appears to be properly sourced.
Soundtrack[edit]
- "2.5 million cassettes sold according" → "2.5 million cassettes were sold, according"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
- Add a serial comma after "Aiyyaa (2012)"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
Release[edit]
- "released in Blu-ray" → "released on Blu-ray"
- Removed --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
- Remove the comma after Pritish Nandy.
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
Legacy[edit]
- Change uses of "..." to "[...]"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
- Add a comma after "Kapur said".
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
- "As parts" → "As part"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
Sequel[edit]
- "(who died in January 2005) before have affected the production" → "(who died in January 2005) affected the production"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
References[edit]
- Archive all archivable sources.
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:12, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
- You can't cite Blu-ray.com (#64) per Wikipedia:WikiProject Film/Resources#Questionable resources.
- Removed --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:12, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
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Drive by comments[edit]
Which source states that this film is based on The Invisible Man? I thought it is not an adaptation of the novel, except for featuring the protagonist having the powers of invisibility. Kailash29792 (talk) 13:59, 19 May 2021 (UTC)