Talk:NWA World Historic Middleweight Championship/GA1
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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 11:08, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- Ok, let's get this one started. Been a few years since I've watched any professional wrestling, but it can't have changed that much!
- Images: All licences fine. I was dubious about the use of an image in the references section. I can't find anything in the Manual of Style to say not to do it although MOS:IMAGERELEVANCE talks of relevance to the article, but not the individual section; WP:IG mentions the indiscriminate placement of images but in relation to moving to image galleries. At four images for an article of this size, I would say drop that one anyway as the placement is just really strange. But if you really want to keep it, then I'm not going to hold have the GA on the basis of this since there's nothing ruling it out specifically other than that I find it odd.
- Lead: I'd change the end of "the NWA-branded championships since they were not part of the NWA" to "were not part of the organisation" simply to avoid the repetition.
- Background: "would later be allowed to host matches for the Mexican National Middleweight Championship although they did have exclusive rights to the championship" - should that be "did not have" exclusion rights?
- Typo in "NWA Wold Middleweight Championship"
- Place commas after years where continuing the sentences. For "In 1991 EMLL" should be "In 1991, EMLL" and "On December 18, 1991 Blue Panther" should be "On December 18, 1991, Blue Panther". I've noticed it in several places in this section, but you may want to cast an eye over the whole article.
- Stick (AAA) after Asistencia Asesoría y Administración
- Reigns: Semitics I know, but change "no wrestler holding the championship twice so far" to "more than once" as the current statement doesn't rule out three times, four times etc.
- You've either got a spacing issue or are missing the months in "23 years, 78 days old"
- Needs a cite to say Último Guerrero was the heaviest (even if it's just a case of moving that cite to the end of the sentence)
- Rules: The weight for Último Guerrero is different here than in the last section
- Title history: Change the column heading "Ref(s)" to "Ref" since you don't have multiple citations in any of the rows
- Cite #21: Needs to be swapped out with a real citation, even if it's just the one from the table.
- I'd add an external links section with a link to the CMLL official website.
That's everything. Ping me back when you've had a chance to look at those, and I'll place this on hold in the meanwhile. Miyagawa (talk) 09:45, 19 August 2016 (UTC)