Talk:Ne-Yo/GA1

GA Review

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GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

   "He debuted into the silver screen with", I've never heard this particular sentence with "into" before. a google search shows the phrase debut into the silver screen to be used once. It seems to be far more common to debut "on" the silver screen. Also "He was later invited again to sing the anthem at the Ford 400 NASCAR race in Homestead, Florida as well." the again, and as well seem redundant or awkward. The again would also imply to me that he was invited by the same people, but I don't think he was. I recommend giving the grammar another pass.

   Fixed. The line "He was later invited again to sing the anthem at the Ford 400 NASCAR race in Homestead, Florida as well." was removed. I can't find sources since I started editing article in preparation of the nom. --Efe (talk) 05:09, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   Is all we can say about his life that he was arrested once and served community service?

   Ne-Yo has a baby. I'll try to find sources. --Efe (talk) 05:09, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

   This statement "Ne-Yo also appeared in several films" is kind of misleading, he's only appeared in 2. I wouldn't really classify that as several and is kind of a weasel word.

   Fixed. --Efe (talk) 05:09, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

   current flurry of edits seem to be vandalism related

   Random vandalism. --Efe (talk) 05:09, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   On hold while these items are cleaned up.--Crossmr (talk) 01:50, 27 January 2009 (UTC)