Talk:Northrop F-20 Tigershark/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Nick-D (talk) 00:59, 6 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article today or tomorrow. Nick-D (talk) 00:59, 6 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comments[edit]

I think that this article meets the GA criteria. I've got some sugge

  • "Offered as a low-cost option, the F-20 was significantly more expensive than the F-5E, but much less expensive than other designs like the $30 million F-15 Eagle" - the article doesn't say what the F-20 was estimated to cost
  • How many aircraft did Bahrain order in November 1982?
  • "Such approval was increasingly granted starting in 1982" - what approval this is for is unclear, though from the paragraph it seems to be for F-16 exports
  • "It was rumored that the aircraft was sold at a loss to keep Northrop's F-20 out of the market." - this should be a matter of public record by now (from the company's public accounts and US government expenditure records), so can it be established or disproved?
  • Where any South Koreans punished for accepting bribes?

Assessment against GA criteria[edit]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

Nick-D (talk) 06:36, 6 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]