Talk:Oak Lawn (Washington, D.C.)

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Review: December 7, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Oak Lawn (Washington, D.C.)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: REDMAN 2019 (talk · contribs) 13:16, 4 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take a look at this one. REDMAN 2019 (talk) 13:16, 4 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

17th-19th centuries[edit]

Ref 1 needs a author.
Ref 2 has no url.
Except for the last sentence, the third paragraph is entirely unsourced.

20th-21st centuries[edit]

The second paragraph also is unsourced except for the last sentence
Ref 14, 27, 28 and 29 have no urls or accessdates.

Main article[edit]

There are quite a few sentences with 4, 5 or even 6 references. Per WP:SYNTH it's best just to have one, two at max.

Comments[edit]

There are a few issues to be addressed here, mainly with the sourcing. So I'm putting this on hold for now. REDMAN 2019 (talk) 12:40, 6 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, I think the issues have been corrected. Take a look when you get a chance. Thank you. APK whisper in my ear 06:10, 7 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Well done. In my opinion this article now meets GA criteria. Passing. REDMAN 2019 (talk) 12:15, 7 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]