Talk:On Her Majesty's Secret Service (film)/GA2

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Matthew RD 02:58, 12 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I shall be conducting this review. I hope to start soon, probably tomorrow. Thanks, -- Matthew RD 02:58, 12 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for waiting. I'll get some reviewing done; this is how the article fairs against the GA criteria;

Well written: See notes below
Sources and verifiability: ✓ Pass
Broad in coverage: ✓ Pass
Neutral: ✓ Pass
Stability: No edit wars, just work from the usual suspects. ✓ Pass
Images: ✓ Pass

"where the sets don't look like sets" should end with reference, like the last 007 film I reviews. Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Same for "change[d] his mind all the time, but he had to do what I wanted him to do." Done (removed quote and re-worked sentence) - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
And the same goes for (in reception section);
- "there are moments when one yearns for a little of his louche panache." Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- "Lazenby is that man, and his performance in superb." Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- "and who actually dares to think that one woman who is his equal is better than a thousand part-time playmates." Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- "but I think that it still might be the best Bond film, as many Bond cultists claim." Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- "He looks uncomfortably in the part like a size four foot in a size ten gumboot." Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Who are the Propellerheads, what genre of music do they specialise in? Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:50, 14 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

And that's all that needs doing. Nice work so far. As always I'll place it on hold and leave you to deal with them. -- Matthew RD 18:24, 14 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for dealing with them quickly. I'll pass it. Good job! -- Matthew RD 19:22, 14 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]