Talk:One Breath (The X-Files)/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 17:14, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
Checking against GA criteria[edit]
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- "The episode is one of those which helped to explore the series' overarching mythology." I feel this is kind of a clunky why to write this, maybe say "The episode helps to explore and expand the series' overarching mythology."
- LEAD, no summary or mention of production
- Infobox, maybe cite where you found all the guests stars at the very bottom, maybe after "Tegan Moss as Young Dana Scully" Is there a way to put a cite after the words "Guest stars"?
- David Duchovny and Gillian Anderson are in parenthesis and wiki-linked in both the intro and plot section, probably a little redundant
- "At Scully's bedside Mulder meets her older sister..." I would add a comma after "At Scully's bedside..."
- "Frohike visits Scully and sneaks out a chart on her that the Lone Gunmen investigate" Probably should be "Frohike visits Scully and sneaks out her medical chart, which the Lone Gunmen later investigate."
- "Chris Carter described the opening scene, where Scully discovers about death and the related sadness and sorrow" should be reworded to something like "Chris Carter described the opening scene, in which Scully discovers the truth about death, sadness, and sorrow..."
- According to my copy of The Truth is Out There: The Official Guide to the X-Files, the episode received 9.1 million household views, not just 9
- "Chris Carter in 1996 declared this one of the series most popular episodes thus far." would sound better as "In 1996, Chris Carter declared "One Breath" to be one of the series' most popular episodes."
- Episodes in quotations should be marked with single apostrophes ('...') instead of parenthesis ("...")
- I feel the last paragraph of the "Reception" section is a little run-ony. Many clean it up a bit and try to break the long phrases up.
- a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- Thorough coverage, no sign of trivia
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Neural POV
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit warring
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- One picture, properly tagged. Are there any other free pictures to spice up the production section, it's kind of boring right now?
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall: