Talk:One Last Time: An Evening with Tony Bennett and Lady Gaga/GA1
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Reviewer: FrB.TG (talk · contribs) 16:49, 28 October 2022 (UTC)
Okay, I'm taking this one instead of Born This Way as this is much shorter and I don't have that much time for now.
- "One Last Time: An Evening with Tony Bennett and Lady Gaga is a television special by American singers Tony Bennett and Lady Gaga that originally aired on November 28, 2021, on CBS while being simulcast on Paramount+." This is a very big opening sentence. I suggest splitting it into two and ending the first one at "Lady Gaga".
- "The special, which was a celebration of Bennett's 95th birthday, was recorded on August 3 and 5, 2021" simplify it as "A celebration of Bennett's 95th birthday, the special was recorded on August 3 and 5, 2011".
- "6.38 million" - NBSP needed.
- "After the first concert, Susan Benedetto, the singer’s" - curly apostrophes should be replaced with a straight one
'. You can use this script to identify and change them. - "In September 2021" - NBSP
- "In September 2021, it was announced that as part of the rollout for Bennett and Gaga's second and final collaborative album, Love for Sale, the duo partnered with ViacomCBS for three different specials, with the first one being One Last Time, the filmed rendering of the two concerts the pair did at Radio City Music Hall." - This a very long, complicated sentence with a fused participle that makes it hard to read.
- "The special starts with Gaga appearing on stage" -> "The special starts as Gaga appears on stage"
- She performs "Luck Be a Lady", an enlists - and enlists, maybe?
- "She then talks about the first time the two singers met, and performs the song Bennett heard Gaga perform
ingon that day" - while we're at it, "perform" is used twice. - and he "rolled through 17 songs in total, [...] with hardly a stumble over a single lyric." Full stop after the quotation mark (MOS:LQ).
- Bennett's "pitch may not be what it once was, but the sense of rhythm is undiminished, the timing is impeccable." Same as above
- What makes ShowBuzzDaily a reliable source?
On hold for 7 days. FrB.TG (talk) 16:49, 28 October 2022 (UTC)
- Hey, FrB.TG. I think I have covered everything. Now, about ShowBuzzDaily, I have seen on many TV shows articles that they usually use it as a source, for example American Horror Story and House of the Dragon. GagaNutellatalk 22:48, 28 October 2022 (UTC)
- Because it’s used in other articles doesn’t make it reliable - WP:OSE. You can establish its reliability by checking their fact-checking process, finding a reputed source saying they are reliable or establishing the author’s reputation as a noted expert. FrB.TG (talk) 21:51, 28 October 2022 (UTC)
- I removed it from the article. What about? GagaNutellatalk 22:48, 28 October 2022 (UTC)
- Because it’s used in other articles doesn’t make it reliable - WP:OSE. You can establish its reliability by checking their fact-checking process, finding a reputed source saying they are reliable or establishing the author’s reputation as a noted expert. FrB.TG (talk) 21:51, 28 October 2022 (UTC)