Talk:Papa's Cabin/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 18:00, 27 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Grabbing this for a future review. Miyagawa (talk) 18:00, 27 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

"Despite the fact that Hank Landry is a prime suspect for Keith, he reassures Veronica that she can still be his protégé." I'm unsure whether the "he" is Landry or Keith telling her.
Production: James Jordan needs a closing bracket.
Reviews: "Eric Goldman of IGN rated the episode an 8.2 out of 10, indicating that it was "great"." - needs an immediate citation due to the quote
Likewise the following sentence.
meaning that it "fell in line with the feel of the show." also
Same for "Veronica Mars's weakest mystery," and "a solid resolution to the Dean O'Dell mystery"

Image rights are good.
References are fine.

That's the lot I think. Miyagawa (talk) 19:31, 29 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Miyagawa: I have responded to your comments, and let me know if there's anything else I can do. :) Johanna^{(talk to me!)} 22:34, 29 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Johanna: Thanks, that all looks good to me now. Happy to promote. Miyagawa (talk) 22:36, 29 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]