Talk:Percik Pesona

A fact from Percik Pesona appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 10 January 2012 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Chrisye had second album syndrome on his fifth album?

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Grammar[edit]

In the reception section, these sentences seem broken

they also under pressure to succeed. retrospectively suggested that he should have known that the album would do poorly when he felt no passion for it.

The first portion needs a verb; the second needs a capital letter. Who suggested the lack of passion? Chris857 (talk) 03:24, 10 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed. Thanks. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:25, 10 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]