Talk:Rabbit Remembered

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Wording of Second Paragraph[edit]

Nelson and Annabelle, along with Pru and an old friend of Nelson, see the film American Beauty.

I think this would be easier to understand with mdashes replacing the commas or reworded so the punctuation isn't necessary. Apologies for anything I'm screwing up here. I'm new to contributing. Stelorl (talk) 23:49, 27 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]