Talk:Reid Detmers

Reid Detmers has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: June 21, 2023. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Reid Detmers/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Cherrell410 (talk · contribs) 16:27, 19 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section):

Citation 22 is missing an author although it is applicable
Fixed. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

b. (citations to reliable sources):

c. (OR):

d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects):

b. (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:

No edit wars, only 2 reverts, one by an ip vandal, the other was someone who undid their own edit
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/fail:

I have just a few suggestions that I am going to list here to improve the article

In the early life section, the source provided doesn't give the name of Detmers' mother
- Added source with mother's name. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Could we get stats provided for the cape cod season
- Added stats. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Could we split the major leagues section in to each year with a level 2 heading (example): 2021: (something that happened), 2022: (something that happened), 2023: (something that happened) (without the parentheses)
- Added subheadings to major league section. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Needs to be updated for the 2023 season
- Updated prose to reflect 2023 season. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I believe way down at the bottom of the article, in the awards and achievements box, there should be one for pitcher of an immaculate inning, correct me if I'm wrong
- As far as I can tell, no such navbox protocol exists, only for no-hitter pitchers. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

@Cherrell410, I've made the requested changes. Let me know if there are any other concerns. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]