Talk:Rhythm Inside (Loïc Nottet song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:53, 14 October 2018 (UTC)

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 15:53, 14 October 2018 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• "Previously, Nottet had participated in native singing competition The Voice Belgique in 2014" - in his
• "for his Selfocracy Tour (2017-2018)." - en dash is needed in place of the hyphen

Background and composition

• "Belgian singer Loïc Nottet rose to fame after finishing second in native singing competition The Voice Belgique in 2014," - became prominent after finishing second in his native
• "Another editor of Wiwibloggs pointed out" - mentioned

Critical reception and accolades

• "Music critics received "Rhythm Inside" with positive responses." - positively received "Rhythm Inside".

Music videos

• "although it had been since deleted." - has
• "the clip was first broadcast on Belgian television La Une." - television channel
• "According to Chris Haplin of Wiwibloggs, the clip "focuses on opposites and fighting conceptions, with shots including two young girls: one a beauty queen, the other playing with dinosaurs" - needs to be sourced
• "the woman awakens again and proceeds into leaving the building." - to leave the building.
• "she finds a clock on one tree" - on a tree

In Vienna

• "They occasionally perform choreography in form" - in the form
• "Michael Cragg pointed out that Nottet" - drew attention
• Italise The Guardian as it is a print publication

Points awarded to Belgium

• Remove the link to the word "Netherlands" since its already linked in the previous sub-section

References

• References 47 & 50 should be spelt as ESCToday like in ref 35
• Remove eurovision.tv in Reference 49
• The author is missing from references 10, 14, 48, 49, 51, 53 and 62

That's my lot. MWright96 (talk) 18:06, 14 October 2018 (UTC)

@MWright96: Thank you very much for reviewing the article! I have implemented all your suggestions, except there were no authors given in refs 48 and 62. Greetings ! ; Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:36, 14 October 2018 (UTC)

• @Cartoon network freak: Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:12, 15 October 2018 (UTC)