Talk:Sanne Keizer

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A fact from Sanne Keizer appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 24 March 2019 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that while on hiatus from her beach volleyball career, Sanne Keizer completed a master's degree in criminal investigation and worked as a police detective?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2019/March. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Sanne Keizer.

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Sportsfan77777 (talk · contribs) 01:16, 14 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this one. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 01:16, 14 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

After a four-year hiatus, Keizer returned to full-time competition ~~now~~ partnered with Meppelink.

Early life, education, and family[edit]

Not a big deal, but maybe call the section "Personal life"?
She was called to the junior national water polo team ~~at some point~~ (or state the year or her age at the time, if available)
she wanted to continue playing a ball game <<<=== I think "ball sport" is the more common term?
obtained a HBO diploma <<<=== obtained "an" HBO diploma

Career[edit]

The duo did not progress past the qualifying rounds in Hellas and in their next four events <<<=== "...or in their next..."
they fell short of their No. 6 seed to finish ninth ===>>> "and finished ninth"
2011 was a breakthrough year for the pair ===>>> "The 2011 season" was a breakthrough year for the pair
they were temporarily setback ===>>> they were temporarily set back

Style of play[edit]

Is it possible to add a "Style of play" section like in your other GAs?

Career statistics[edit]

In the performance timeline, there should be a column titled 2014–17 to show the gap during her hiatus.

Overall[edit]

Everything looks sourced.
No bare refs.
No dab links.
All of the links work.
No plagiarism detected.

Overall, the article looks pretty solid. The biggest comment is to add a "style of play" section. Everything else is minor. Placing on hold. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 01:45, 14 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Sportsfan77777: Thanks for the review. There shouldn't be a problem adding a style of play section, but I probably won't be able to work on this until this weekend. Bennv3771 (talk)

Sure, no problem! Sportsfan77777 (talk) 07:10, 14 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Sportsfan77777: I think I've addressed all the issues you raised. The only thing I left unchanged was the section title for "Early life, education, and family", which I prefer over "Personal life" as I think it some of the content it covers doesn't really fall under "personal". Let me know if there's anything I missed or if there are new issues to be addressed. Thanks again for the review. Bennv3771 (talk) 02:25, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good! I tweaked two things, and am passing the review! Sportsfan77777 (talk) 02:35, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]