Talk:Seen (artist)/Archive 1

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It seems to me that this article is strongly biased in favor of graffiti culture and against its critics. Due to Wikipedia's guidelines for Neutrality, I believe that this article should be changed to a more historical perspective by removing inflammatory language. I have changed, for example, "long after many had admitted defeat at the hands of the MTA" ("Life," paragraph 2) to something less anti-MTA: "long after increased pressure from the MTA had stopped many from doing so." Does this sound reasonable to others? Bkbyler (talk) 01:53, 20 August 2011 (UTC)