Talk:Sher Shah Suri/GA1
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Reviewer: Sangsangaplaz (talk · contribs) 14:08, 23 November 2023 (UTC)
Lack of NPOV on the rise to power section[edit]
Please remove words to watch to enhance the NPOV. This is a minor fix so no immediate failure. User:Sangsangaplaz (talk)
Fixed[edit]
Yep, I fixed these issues and re-wrote the section. Noorullah (talk) 08:54, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
Issues[edit]
The issues are not fully fixed. The first paragraph of the section in discussion is a bit lacking in NPOV and relies on only 2 sources, I recommend adding other sources to support the semi-promotional claims in the first paragraph. I recommend adding the incline citations after relevant sentences instead of the end of the paragraph. Also please don't use the reply feature in this talk page, it breaks the GA review. In source mode, add one more '=' sign than the comment after the comment you are replying to, nominator. Also sign it manually (with four ~). Sangsangaplaz (talk) 09:12, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
Fixed Issues[edit]
Rewrote the section and dealt with NPOV issues, also added another source. Noorullah (talk) 19:17, 26 November 2023 (UTC)