Talk:Should've Said No/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: VersaceSpace (talk · contribs) 22:24, 6 September 2022 (UTC)

Reviewing this now. Will be done by the end of today or tomorrow. —VersaceSpace 🌃 22:24, 6 September 2022 (UTC)

Lead and infobox

• "in which the footage was also later used as the official music video" needs either compressing, or to be split off from the sentence it's on.
• "It charted on singles charts" → "It entered singles charts"

Background and writing

• The "something really crazy" quote would be better off shortened
• The part where she compares "Should've Said No" and "Picture to Burn" should be condensed to just be about "Should've Said No"

Music and lyrics

• "incorporates banjo" → "incorporates the banjo"
• no need to link rock

Release and commercial performance

• The bit about the two songs being written by Swift can be removed

Critical reception

• so there's two problems with the second sentence here. 1) "Picture to Burn" doesn't need to be named, you could simply say that "Should've Said No" was named as one of the best on the album. 2) which album? It's in the lead but it should be here too.
• "set a precedent to" → "set a precedent for"

References

• A few of these don't have archives

Overall

• Copyvio score is OK, and I can't find any other errors right now. Holding this, and I'll give a quick scan again when you're done. —VersaceSpace 🌃 22:55, 6 September 2022 (UTC)

  Thanks for the review, VersaceSpace. I have addressed your comments accordingly. Ippantekina (talk) 02:06, 7 September 2022 (UTC)

  Nice, passing. —VersaceSpace 🌃 04:05, 8 September 2022 (UTC)