Talk:Shukri al-Quwatli/GA2

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Reviewer: Cerebellum (talk · contribs) 13:12, 1 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I will be reviewing this article. --Cerebellum (talk) 13:12, 1 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

This is an outstanding article! It easily meets the GA criteria. Pass. Still, below are some suggestions for further improvement:

It might be more logical to move the "Family" section before the "Birth" section.
The section "Arab Kingdom of Syria" does not link to Arab Kingdom of Syria or even mention the term. I think a main article link to Arab Kingdom of Syria would help.
You could include info on how the Great Syrian Revolt ended. The article kind of skips from mid-1926, with bickering among opposition leaders, to political events in late 1927.

That's it! Great work! --Cerebellum (talk) 13:31, 1 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you Cerebellum. I addressed your first two points and will address the third very soon. Cheers --Al Ameer (talk) 18:54, 1 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]