Talk:Spice Up Your Life/GA1
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Reviewer: Lampman (talk) 18:12, 20 October 2010 (UTC)
I did some copy-editing; nothing major, just some language issues here and there. Please make sure I haven't ruined anything! Apart from this, I didn't find any major issues with it, so I'll just promote it forthright.
With some more copy-editing it probably shouldn't be too far off FA-standard. In that case there are a few things you might want to look at. First of all I'm not too crazy about the reference overkill; it hinders the flow of reading. If you could combine some refs that would be good. Secondly, an article about the Spice Girls ought to be in British English, yet you use words such as "color". Finally, make sure you're consistent with the use of dashes – they're very picky about that at FAR. Good job! Lampman (talk) 19:10, 20 October 2010 (UTC)