Talk:Spotlight (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 05:30, 9 June 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

I've reviewd the article, in general all is fine except something:

Lead

• The song was used in a Mitsubishi VCR commercial, featuring Madonna. -> maybe where she appeared?
  • Done.

Critical Review

• Chicago Tribune -> Wikilink
  • It has been wikilinked in the line before. Again linking it will cause WP:OVERLINK.

Chart performance

• "...stations started to play the song unofficially and it managed to garner enough airplay to appear..." -> source?
  • Added from Feldman.

Media appearance

• "The commercial featured..." -> In the commercial featured...
  • Rephrased.

Credits and personnel

• Source?
  • Added.

Notes

ISBN 0743228804, from reference 1 is failing.

Failing? How? The same isbn is given at Google also. --Legolas ^(talk2me) 06:00, 9 June 2010 (UTC)

Well, I used WorldCat, IBDB and IBList and all failed, but don't worry I found the correct ISBN (0743227093). Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 06:12, 9 June 2010 (UTC)

Final comments

Some comments, not much work to do, so the article is in hold on for a week. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 05:30, 9 June 2010 (UTC)

OK. So anything else? --Legolas ^(talk2me) 06:27, 9 June 2010 (UTC)

The ISBN (above). Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 06:29, 9 June 2010 (UTC)

All done. --Legolas ^(talk2me) 06:33, 9 June 2010 (UTC)

So, congratulation the article pass its nomination. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 06:37, 9 June 2010 (UTC)