Talk:Steep, Hampshire/GA1
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:20, 23 March 2016 (UTC)
Hi! I am interested to review this. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 04:20, 23 March 2016 (UTC)
Lead[edit]
- Could England be linked? I have seen the country linked in many articles.
- According to the 2011 census of England?
- I've linked the United Kingdom Census 2011 JAGUAR 11:45, 23 March 2016 (UTC)
- According to the 2011 census, it had a population of 849 This important fact has not been mentioned in the main text. I guess the citation could go there as well.
- a progressive public school I think "progressive" could be linked to Progressive education
Prehistory to Roman[edit]
- The village name has been spelled in various ways Are all these names in English or in French as well? Foreign names are typically kept in italics.
- La Stuppe, La Stiepe When were these used? Are they still used? Should be clear.
- Can "ridge" be linked?
Medieval to Tudor[edit]
- The early 17th century was also described as a "great rebuilding" of the village described by whom?
- Can "depression" be linked?
- Linked Depression (economics) JAGUAR 11:45, 23 March 2016 (UTC)
19th century to Second World War[edit]
- Can "conduit" be linked?
- and his children attended Bedales School and his wife also taught there Can we avoid repeating the "and...and" structure?
Geography and demographics[edit]
- Steep is located in the eastern southern part of Hampshire Could be clearer if we write "eastern part of southern Hampshire".
- "Steep Marsh" is a duplink.
- I clicked the link and it directs to Steep Marsh just fine? Maybe it was an error on the toolserver's part JAGUAR 11:45, 23 March 2016 (UTC)
- sandy loam, with the subsoil being gravel and sand I think we need more links here.
- The prominent crops are wheat, barley, and oats I think we need not link "wheat" at least.
Notable landmarks[edit]
- Can chancel and nave be linked or explained?
- Ropley is a duplink
- The Harrow is an 18th-century Grade II listed public house and was first built in the 18th century Can we avoid repeating "18th century"?
Possible paraphrasing[edit]
Earwig's copyvio detector showed some paraphrasing from the website [[1]]. You can see the results here. This should be repaired. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 05:48, 23 March 2016 (UTC)
Sources: Ref. 6 seems a bit cloudy. I am not sure if Google Maps can be used as a source.
That should be all. Good luck! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 04:55, 23 March 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you so much for the review Sainsf! I think I've got everything. I made this article as comprehensive as possible, but it's hard to do so with only a handful of sources. I was lucky enough to find what sources I could anyway, as information on these places are scarce. I wish I could have found better photos on the internet, the scenery is stunning. JAGUAR 11:50, 23 March 2016 (UTC)
- Awesome Jaguar! About duplinks, they are simply repeated links. No trouble with the links themselves, but we typically link terms once in the article. That done, I would be happy to pass this article. Indeed, I would love to see the scenery. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 11:58, 23 March 2016 (UTC)
- Oops, all done now. I've delinked the duplinks. Yeah, the scenery is stunning, it's called Steep for a reason! I was surprised that there weren't any images on it. JAGUAR 12:23, 23 March 2016 (UTC)
- Hehe, I wish I could take a dozen snaps of it! I am mad at scenery. Getting back to business, I believe the article is ready for GA status now. The copyvio issue has improved and is not serious. The prose is excellent and supported by a sufficient number of sources. I gladly promote this article. Congrats! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 12:32, 23 March 2016 (UTC)
- Oops, all done now. I've delinked the duplinks. Yeah, the scenery is stunning, it's called Steep for a reason! I was surprised that there weren't any images on it. JAGUAR 12:23, 23 March 2016 (UTC)
- Awesome Jaguar! About duplinks, they are simply repeated links. No trouble with the links themselves, but we typically link terms once in the article. That done, I would be happy to pass this article. Indeed, I would love to see the scenery. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 11:58, 23 March 2016 (UTC)