Talk:Swine (Lady Gaga song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 06:25, 23 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

  • was inspired by Gaga's → was inspired by the singer's (word repetition)
  • when she was 19, by an unnamed → when she was 19 by an unidentified (no comma)
  • Set comma after "Throughout the song"
  • comparing them → isn't the typo wrong here?
  • on Gaga, onstage. → no comma here
  • (along with Gaga's "Til It Happens to You") → Remove the brackets and put this after "The Haunting Ground" with a comma + add year of release for "Til It Happens to You" in brackets

Infobox[edit]

  • flawless ;)

Background and writing[edit]

  • Development of Lady Gaga's → no full names
  • her second one → you can state "her second record" here
  • which Gaga explained → state "the singer's" here to avoid word repetition
  • Gaga recalled → same as above
  • emotional therapy ... I wasn't even → ... to [...]
  • happened ... I saw → ... to [...]

Recording and composition[edit]

  • Bradley Stern described the music → state "saw the music" here to avoid word repetition
  • key of G minor with → set comma before "with"
  • Lyrically, the song → use "recording" here to avoid word repetition
  • comparing them → same as in the lead
  • chorus is reached with Gaga belting → chorus is reached, with her belting
  • shouting: "You're just → replace : with ,
  • pig inside..." → pig inside [...]"

Critical reception[edit]

  • wrote of the song: "It's a → replace : with ,
  • describing Gaga's belting of the lyrics, and the sounds from the keyboards, as reminiscent of → describing Gaga's belting of the lyrics and the sounds from the keyboards being reminiscent of
  • long... → long [...]

Live performances[edit]

  • one-minute "teaser" → no need of the "" here
  • Gaga's show at the iTunes Festival → State "The singer's" here to avoid word repetition
  • at the South by Southwest (SXSW) music festival in Austin, Texas → place this after "Swine" for better flow
  • then invited performance → which was followed by her inviting performance
  • reported: → reported,
  • I think we should definitely keep the colon since the quote starts with a new paragraph. ---Another Believer (Talk) 18:12, 24 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • complained that the performance → state "the show" here to avoid word repetition
  • told MTV News: "I can → replace : with ,
  • Gaga told Today → Gaga confessed to Today (word rep.)

Credits and personnel[edit]

  • Unlink Artpop
  • Done. Now says, "Credits adapted from the album's liner notes." ---Another Believer (Talk) 18:05, 24 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Charts[edit]

  • flawless ;)

Other stuff[edit]

Copy-violation[edit]

  • 50.0% is WAY too much! Please look for the first two sources at the top of the list and reduce the content from them in the article's body

Images and others[edit]

  • Images perfectly illustrate the article

Links[edit]

References[edit]

  • Please avoid WP:SHOUTING in refs 2, 5, 10, 12, 13, 14, 17, 19, 20, 21 and 31!
  • As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article.
  • 2 dead links!! Please fix this!

Outcome[edit]

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