Talk:Tanzania and the World Bank

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1. The lead is easy to understand and very informative. However, it is a little long relative to the whole page. One of the comments of feedback I got for my page was that the summary should be brief and concise.

2. There are no links to other pages. This may help in the overall understanding of the topic and might be aesthetically pleasing. Each paragraph does make its own point and is clearly labeled

3. It is hard for me to know if the current coverage is balanced because there are no citations. If you included news articles, journals and such there should be an even amount of coverage. Avoid using World Bank references only.

4. The language is informative and neutral but there is no information on whether the WB is successful or not in Tanzania.

5. There are no references so I will not be able to judge their value. I do suggest adding pictures and linking topics and possibly adding a see also section, which will allow people to see other wiki articles that are in close reference to yours and can add additional substance. :)

Nariaszu (talk) 21:32, 6 December 2018 (UTC)Nariaszu[reply]