Talk:The Boat Race 1970/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 10:40, 9 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

You've got like fifteen articles outstanding for reviews, so lets see if I can at least give you reviews on a couple of them!

I've taken a look and the only issue I can see (and I'm being pedantic here!) is that a couple of the quotes don't have citations at the following punctuation point but are included at the end of the sentence (because the is another quote after the comma). So Cite 20 needs be replicated after the comma following "unorthodox tactics", and Cite 21 should be added once again following the comma after Donald Legget. Like I said... pedantic. :)
Done. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:57, 9 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Also in Reaction, Railton of the Times' first half of the quote doesn't have a direct cite.
Done. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:57, 9 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Furthermore, do the reporters in Reaction have first names?
Added Jim, Legget's first name is already mentioned earlier. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:57, 9 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

One final thing - I'd wikilink Cox the first time it appears in the article text outside of the table. There's a few bits of rowing terminology in the article that I'd love to see linked (for example stakeboat) but there isn't a relevent article to link it through to. Miyagawa (talk) 10:40, 9 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Have linked a couple of the terms with articles or which have entries in the glossary. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:57, 9 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! I believe I've addressed and responded to all your comments. Many thanks. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:57, 9 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Great, happy to pass. Miyagawa (talk) 11:10, 9 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]