Talk:The Chariot (band)/GA1

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Hey, it's been a while since I've reviewed a good-article nominee. What I see is very good, though :-)

Some preamble

Well-written - Pass; Factually accurate - Pass; Broad - Pass; Neutral - Pass; Stable - Pass; Images - Pass

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One thing in the lede, prose-wise:

"The band has been privy to frequent lineup changes."

privy means "allowed to know a secret". You might do some byte-killing and just go for "The band has had frequent lineup changes.", perhaps with a quick note on why the members keep changing.

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the quotes "legendary" and "destructive" do not have sources. They need sources, as they're direct quotes. The trick will be to keep the lede from being cluttered with citations, so I suggest moving down to Musical Style.

Reviewer: Xavexgoem (talk) 02:07, 20 November 2009 (UTC)

• Alright, I made the changes you have suggested. I cannot speculate on why the band has frequent lineup changes, however; there are no references explaining it. Thanks, -- Noj r (talk) 02:32, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
  • I've passed it. Grats, Xavexgoem (talk) 20:48, 27 November 2009 (UTC)