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Isn't more suitable to rename this page to "The Pussycat Dolls 2020 Tour;" Ticketmaster and the official press release dubs it as that. --MazurJacek (talk) 17:59, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
AXS call it The Pussycat Dolls Tour, Ticket Master calls it The Pussycat Dolls 2020 Tour and Live Nation calls it The Pussycat Dolls 2020 Tour too. I would support it being moved to The Pussycat Dolls Tour or The Pussycat Dolls 2020 Tour with a note in brackets that it has been dubbed the Unfinished Business tour by the media due to the group saying that their reunion was unfinished business. → Lil-℧niquԐ1 - (Talk) - 11:00, 7 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
There are tons of sourcesthatrefertoitas that. I don't think that we can infer that the media made up the name based on the fact that they said that they had "unfinished business". It might become more obvious when the tour starts and merch becomes available to see, but for now I think that Unfinished Business is fine per WP:COMMONNAME. — Status (talk · contribs) 15:38, 18 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
The Pussycat Dolls → the Pussycat Dolls per MOS:THEMUSIC - Task complete.
"announced that the Dolls were reforming for" → "revealed that they were reforming for" Task complete.
"was involved in the conversations to reunite but decided to" → "declined to reunite but decided to" per the body, unless you can source actual discussion about a reunion Task complete.
"with ten dates across" → "with 10 dates across" per MOS:NUM Task complete.
"(Romania) and Super Bloom" → "(Romania), and Superbloom Festival" per the body Task complete.
"in January 2022 with the fate of the group" → "in January 2022 with the fate of the Pussycat Dolls" Task complete.
"a new song "React" and have since confirmed that new music is in production alongside" → "a new song titled "React" and subsequently confirmed new music being in production alongside" Task complete.
"member, Melody Thornton decided not to reunite with the group" → "member Melody Thornton decided not to reunite with them" Task complete.
"to tour the UK and Ireland," → "to tour the UK," per the source Task complete.
"noted that the group" → "noted that the Pussycat Dolls" Task complete.
"in the making" and tour was" → "in the making", and the tour was" Task complete.
The Brighton Pride appearance is not sourced as part of the tour Task complete. - resolved with an additional source that demonstrates the date was added to the tour. it was also present on ticketmaster at the time but I can't retrospectively find the website as it has changed since.
"The tour's first leg was" → "The Pussycat Doll Tour's first leg was" per this being a new section Task complete.
"visiting 9 venues" → "visiting nine venues" per MOS:NUM Task complete.
Make sure you are invoking the correct source(s) for each sentence or continuous group of sentences Task complete.reworded this section and added some further sources to support this section better
"postponed for a year; with confirmation" → "postponed for a year, with confirmation" Task complete.
"As of April 2020, the tour" → "By April 2020, the tour" Task complete.
"in Dundee, Scotland before" → "in Dundee, Scotland, before" Task complete.
"Philippines, Japan and Oceania have" → "the Philippines, Japan, and Oceania, have" Task complete.
I've done upto here Kyle Peake. I'll complete the rest over the next few days. I've left any comments or explanations in blue. ≫ Lil-Unique1-{ Talk }- 21:58, 22 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"Wyatt and Antin also" → "Wyatt, and Antin also" Task complete.
"5% reflecting that she left before the release of the group's second album," → "5%, reflecting that she left before the release of the group's second album" Task complete.
"that would handle future earning from the group" → "that would handle the future of the Pussycat Dolls" Task complete.
"the partnership with Antin" → "the partnership" with Antin" per the actual quote ending there Task complete.
"as well as accusing Antin of" → "as well as accusing her of" Task complete.
Any sentences with usage of direct quotes should have the appropriate ref(s) invoked at the end Task complete.
Cite News-ABS-CBN as publisher instead on ref 21 and pipe to ABS-CBN Task complete.
What exactly makes the second citation of ref 22 a reliable source? If you meanTickets for Funthey're a Brazilian tickets retailer.
Same as above for ref 23 and if kept, fix MOS:CAPS issues as above
Fix MOS:CAPS issues with refs 24 33 38 Task complete.
Remove the publisher from ref 25 Task complete.
Remove wikilink on Ticketmaster for ref 26 Task complete.
Remove or replace ref 27 per WP:METRO; the others are for direct quotes from members so should be fine Task complete.
bond → Bond on ref 29, also cite news.com.au as publisher instead with the wikilink Task complete. - I have left in italics because News.com.au is a website. The publisher would be News Corp Australia
Fix MOS:CAPS issues and WP:OVERLINK of AXS with refs 32 and 35 Task complete.
The Press should only be linked once on ref 36 Task complete.
Fix MOS:CAPS issues with ref 37 and fix WP:OVERLINK of Ticketmaster Task complete.
Fill in the citation for ref 42 Task complete.
What exactly makes ref 45 a reliable source? If kept, fix MOS:CAPS issues. Task complete.It is operated by Concrete Playground, a large digital periodical in Australia that garners 800,000 readers a month. Its founder Rich Fogarty is a renowned Australian marketeer. It received coverage in Australia marketing articles. It is also one of Australia's largest indie digital publishers according to Media Week.≫ Lil-Unique1-{ Talk }- 20:17, 23 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
WP:OVERLINK of Ticketmaster on ref 46 and cite as publisher instead Task complete. ≫ Lil-Unique1-{ Talk }- 20:17, 23 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 16:38, 22 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Hi @Kyle Peake: I believe everything has been addressed. Comments where I left them are in blue. ≫ Lil-Unique1-{ Talk }- 20:19, 23 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Lil-unique1 This article definitely has been improved now and I did some copy editing too, however the dates in reception are still not backed up as being in April 2020. --K. Peake 06:57, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Kyle Peake. I've been and changed that reference - I hadn't released that because of so many changes to the tour dates, the original source had degraded. ≫ Lil-Unique1-{ Talk }- 10:24, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Lil-unique1 Kudos for finding the correct reference after that time, though I quickly changed it to publisher for you instead. ✓Pass now, fabulous job especially on the pace! --K. Peake 11:17, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]