Talk:These Days (Powderfinger song)/GA1
GA Reassessment[edit]
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- The lead does not meet WP:LEAD.
- Large amounts of the article appear to be unsourced.
- The article is not broad in its coverage and appears to be missing information.
- Two dead links which fail WP:V.
Seven days to fix the issues. Till 03:04, 24 January 2013 (UTC)
Sorry but seven days later and I still don't think that it meets Good Article standards. For example, there are a bunch of sentences which are unsourced, such as "Fanning alone performed a sombre acoustic guitar version of the song at a live benefit concert in the days following the 2002 Bali bombings." and "The song was voted at #21 in the Triple J Hottest 100 of All Time, 2009, where it was the second-highest placed Australian single in the countdown." The prose is confusing in places, such as "...which contains a line from These Days is sung in hip-hop style early in its lyrics." Also, if a music video was shot, wouldn't there be more information to write about? The only sentence in that section is "A music video was produced to promote the single."—Well, that's nice, but does not really tell much to the reader. I have decided to delist this article as a GA because I consider these real issues, if anyone disagrees with my decision it can be appealed at WP:GAR. Till 09:13, 31 January 2013 (UTC)