Talk:Theta Tau Educational Foundation
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The following paragraph seems to be endorsing Theta Tau. "Theta Tau Educational Foundation can achieve all this and more" is phrased as if it were a guarantee or electorial advertisement (you know, i'm lacking metaphorical technique.)
"The Theta Tau Educational Foundation can achieve all this and more. The Foundation will promote education and training for leadership, teamwork..."
Maybe it would be better to rewrite it in a more isolated perspective. As in, replace the previous paragraph with Theta Tau's aims. Personally, I feel that if Theta Tau's claims (as in the "can achieve all this..." etc) are to remaim on this page then they should be seperated from the abstract of the page, and not be mixed in with observations of Theta Tau's current practices.
88.110.124.71 22:27, 31 May 2007 (UTC) Johnny Morrice
Facts section removed[edit]
I've removed the "Facts" section. The entire article should be about the facts, if there was important information removed please reincorporate it into the article. - Tbsdy lives (talk) 22:38, 5 September 2008 (UTC)