Talk:Thirteen (House)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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The article is good enough to be a GA with one exception: the introduction. The second paragraph in it is overly detailed and contains information that is not in the article itself. I suggest moving that paragraph in the name section, and add a bit from the other sections too. See WP:INTRO for help. Nergaal (talk) 10:37, 9 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I think I've fixed it.--Music26/11 12:42, 9 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I am still not happy with the first sentence of the second paragraph. Also, try to add the Huntington's thing somewhere in the intro. Nergaal (talk) 22:36, 9 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to it A.S.A.P.--Music26/11 20:42, 10 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

It looks much better now. --Music26/11 14:54, 11 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I brlirvr it looks good enough for GA now, although a line about the character's reception would be nice too. Nergaal (talk) 17:28, 11 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]