Talk:USS Texas (1892)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: JonCatalán^(Talk) 06:28, 11 October 2010 (UTC)

• "Texas had several accidents early in her career, including but not limited to sudden flooding and settling to the bottom to her gun deck at dock in New York (drowning several crew)..." → I'm not exactly sure what you mean here, but I changed it to this hoping that it clarifies the sentence, "Texas had several accidents early in her career, including but not limited to sudden flooding—which settled to the bottom to her gun deck at dock in New York (drowning several of her crew members)—, significantly damaging to her hull in drydock." My sentence may have to be reworded, as well. Both seem unsatisfactory.
• Did the usual copyediting.
• I removed spaces around em dashes. Some professional editors include spaces, but as far as I know Wikipedia usually does not include spaces around em dashes.
• The article looks generally good, and is very informative.
• Images check out.
• Referencing is good.

JonCatalán^(Talk) 06:50, 11 October 2010 (UTC)