Talk:Undone (MercyMe album)

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June 21, 2012	Good article nominee	Listed

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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Christian rock band MercyMe employed the London Symphony Orchestra to play strings on their album Undone?

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Undone (MercyMe album)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 02:28, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):
b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Infobox[edit]

List the locations of where the album was recorded in the "Recorded" section
- Fixed.
Source for release date of "Here With Me" is not necessary in this context
- Removed.

Lead[edit]

It was produced by Pete Kipley and released on April 20, 2004. → Specify what record label released the album
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 03:27, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
...was released to Christian... → Specify what this means in its context
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 03:27, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Background and recording[edit]

Undone was produced by Pete Kipley. It was recorded by F. Reid Shippen, Mike O' Connor, and Steve Bishir... → Combine into one sentence for better prose
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 03:27, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Composition[edit]

No issues

Reception[edit]

...and music wer too similar to the band's previous efforts... → Fix spelling mistake
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 03:27, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
...reflect the trend in secular adult alternative[disambiguation needed]... → Fix disambiguation issue
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 03:27, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Tony Cummings of Cross Rhythms gave the album nine out of ten stars, calling it a "huge improvement" over Spoken For.[10] → Put year in parentheses of "Spoken For"
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 03:27, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Singles[edit]

No issues

Track listing[edit]

No issues

Personnel[edit]

No issues

Charts and certifications[edit]

No issues

Release history[edit]

No issues

References[edit]

Reference 5 → Provide actual link to source (Google Books has a lot of archived issues of Billboard magazine)
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 03:27, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 8 → "CCM Magazine" and "Salem Publishing" do not need to be wiki-linked, as they were already
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 03:27, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
References 14-17, 22, 23, 26, 27 → "Billboard" and "Prometheus Global Media" do not need to be wiki-linked
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 03:27, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 21 → "Billboard.biz" should not be wiki-linked
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 03:27, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 25 → "Recording Industry Association of America" should not be wiki-linked
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 03:27, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
References 28 & 29 → "Allmusic" and "Rovi Corporation" should not be wiki-linked
Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 03:27, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. There are some prose issues and reference formatting issues that are keeping this article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues which you believe do not affect good article status. If you have any questions, I will be more than happy to help. Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 03:08, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Continue the good work as it is much appreciated by Wikipedia and its readers. Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 05:02, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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