Talk:Venus (Lady Gaga song)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 06:25, 23 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

The song also includes a sample from the French → The recording also includes a sample from French
album, Interstellar Low Ways (1966). Sun Ra was thus given a co-writing → album, Interstellar Low Ways (1966), thus receiving a co-writing
- I wrote it a little differently.
after the positive reception → following the positive reception
four hooks and references → four hooks, and references
same named planet → same-named planet
Three different artworks were done by Steven Klein → Three accompanying artworks were designed for the single by Steven Klein
but never materialized, instead the track was later used during a sequence in the music video for Artpop's third single, "G.U.Y." → but was never materialized, with the track being later used during a sequence in the music video for Artpop's third single, "G.U.Y." instead.
attained moderated success → attained moderate success
on charts around the world → on worldwide charts
Gaga performed the song → You've already used "song" before; alternate here with "recording"
performances happened at → performances occurred at

Infobox[edit]

One of three covers released alongside the track. → One of the three covers used to digitally commercialize the track.
Unlink Lady Gaga the second time

Background and development[edit]

No full names please
her second one → her second record
In the meantime Gaga → state "the singer" here for alternation
French DJ → French disc jockey
the same named → the same-named
on a journey... I kinda → ... to [...]
groove. (...) This song → (...) to [...]

Recording and composition[edit]

Madeon noted: "She would → : to ,
for the song → alternate here with "track"
Madeon and worked on → Madeon, and handled (word rep.)
mastered the song → alternate here with "track"
delivery is similar → delivery are similar
finally it reaches the chorus → finally the chorus is reached
euphoria" with Gaga belting the lyrics: "When → euphoria", with Gaga belting the lyrics, "When
and the song follows → alternate here with "the recording"

Release and artwork[edit]

purchase on Monday October 28, 2013 → Stating that it was a Monday is overfluous
to the release Gaga release three cover → to the release, the singer unveiled
sees Gaga also standing naked → use "her" here for alternation
collaborated with Gaga on interludes → alternate with "the singer" here
This was followed by a shot → This is followed by a shot

Critical reception[edit]

describing it as "catchy" → remove "as"
positive review to the song → alternate "song" with "track" here
commented that with the song packing → commented that, with the song incorporating
glittering dance balladry → close the quote from Idolator here.
as one of the songs audience can download → as one of the tracks the audience can download
gave the song 3 stars out of 5 rating → gave the song a rating of 3 stars out of 5
and called the song "almost parodical" → alternate here with "recording"

Chart performance[edit]

copies of digital downloads → digital copies
- I would disagree that the verbiage present is correct.
Australia and New Zealand respectively → comma before "respectively"
of the album pre-order → of the album's pre-order
top-ten of the download → the top 10 of the download
and top-ten of the main → and the top 10 of the main
This enabled the song → alternate here with "track"

Live performances[edit]

Two weeks later Gaga performed → Set comma before "Gaga"
Gaga went barefoot → Alternate with "the singer" here
Before starting the performance Gaga announced → comma before "Gaga announced"
During the opening for the Lady Gaga and the Muppets' Holiday Spectacular → Remove overfluous "the"
coiffured high and wearing a → coiffured high alongside wearing a
Gaga also the song on Japanese → The word "sang" is missing in this sentence
The song was included on → alternate with "the track"
described it: "Gaga did 'Venus' → : to ,

Credits and personnel[edit]

Unlink Artpop and Lady Gaga here

Charts[edit]

flawless ;)

Other stuff[edit]

Copy-violation[edit]

41.5% is slightly too much! Please look for the first source at the top of the list and reduce the content from it in the article's body

Images and others[edit]

Images perfectly illustrate the article

Links[edit]

1 little problem here! Please fix!

References[edit]

Please avoid WP:SHOUTING in several refs!!
- If you are referring to the capitalization of ARTPOP, then that does not come under shouting. Media denotes the album name as ARTPOP only. We at Wikipedia remove that stylization. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 14:42, 25 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]
As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article.
No dead links! Good job!

Outcome[edit]

On hold for 7 days! Good job with the article!! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:02, 24 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- @Cartoon network freak: all done! —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 14:42, 25 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  - Passing! Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:09, 25 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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