Talk:Victory Unintentional

Novels: Short story / Sci-fi Mid‑importance

	Novels portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Novels, an attempt to build a comprehensive and detailed guide to novels, novellas, novelettes and short stories on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the project and contribute to the general Project discussion to talk over new ideas and suggestions.NovelsWikipedia:WikiProject NovelsTemplate:WikiProject Novelsnovel articles
Mid	This article has been rated as Mid-importance on the project's importance scale.
	This article is supported by Short story task force.
	This article is supported by Science fiction task force.

Ambiguity[edit]

The sentence "They quickly retreat back to Earth." is ambiguous. Who retreats? The robots would go to Earth but they are not retreating. The Jovians may be retreating but not to Earth. Since the following sentence says "On return from the surface of planet Jupiter," not mentioning arrival at Earth the previous sentence is not even consistent with this one. I suggest deleting the ambiguous sentence. Zaslav (talk) 23:34, 3 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]