Template:Did you know nominations/Chandramukhi (character)

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 19:57, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Chandramukhi (character)

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• ... that the actress who played Chandramukhi in the 1955 film Devdas was the first person to decline the Filmfare Award for Best Supporting Actress as she thought that her role was not a supporting one?

• Comment: Article created in February 16 by myself and expanded by myself.

Created by Ason27 (talk). Self nom at 09:43, 18 February 2012 (UTC)

• I haven't looked at the article, but the hook is too long (215 characters) and could use some rewording. My suggested hook is 198:
• ALT1: ... that the actress who played Chandramukhi in the 1955 film Devdas was the first person to decline the Filmfare Award for Best Supporting Actress as she thought that her role was not a supporting one? MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 21:12, 20 February 2012 (UTC)

• Regarding the new hook suggested by Mandarax, I'm happy with the shorter version and would like to go with it.(Ason27 (talk) 01:32, 21 February 2012 (UTC))

• Article is both new enough and long enough and the hook is appropriately sourced. I have done a little copyediting on the article. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:18, 4 March 2012 (UTC)