Template:Did you know nominations/Collingham Gardens

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 07:26, 4 August 2022 (UTC)

Collingham Gardens

Plaque honouring Howard Carter, who lived at no 19
Plaque honouring Howard Carter, who lived at no 19

Philafrenzy (talk) 07:59, 31 July 2022 (UTC)

    • Reviewed: Lillian Chase
    • Comment: Hook is a bit humdrum - anything more interesting would be appreciated. Thank you, Philafrenzy, the ALTs are better.

Created by Edwardx (talk) and Philafrenzy (talk) and Cielquiparle (talk). Nominated by Edwardx (talk) at 22:48, 30 July 2022 (UTC).

  • Full review to follow, but a spot check checks out. I have a preference for ALT1a for being punchier, I think the mention of Oakley just distracts from the main point. Technically this could be a negative hook, but Marley's dead so BLP doesn't apply here. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 01:50, 2 August 2022 (UTC)
  • As mentioned in my earlier spot check, the article meets DYK requirements. No close paraphrasing was found and a QPQ has been provided. Since The Times is paywalled, I'm unable to access the source for the Bob Marley hook so I am assuming good faith. I prefer ALT1a as being punchier as I don't think the mention of Oakley Street is necessary to the main hook fact. While the Carter angle is also okay in my opinion (though I may be biased as I'm a bit of a history buff), I think the Marley angle is catchier; nevertheless, the Carter hook is also an option in case the Marley hook is unsuitable for whatever reason. The image is fine but is only suitable for the Carter hook, so the hook can't have the image if Marley's hook is promoted. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 01:30, 3 August 2022 (UTC)