Template:Did you know nominations/Gloria Soluk

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 22:20, 13 July 2013 (UTC)

Gloria Soluk

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• ... that Gloria Soluk was the first coach of the Michigan Wolverines softball team and the third coach of its women's basketball team?

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Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nominated at 00:49, 12 July 2013 (UTC).

• The last sentence has no inline citation. Close paraphrasing - "Soluk received a master's degree in counseling and guidance from the University of Michigan." in article compared to "where she gained a master's degree in counseling and guidance". SL93 (talk) 01:26, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
  • A QPQ is still needed as well. SL93 (talk) 01:29, 12 July 2013 (UTC)

Will take care of the QPQ and the inline citation, but not sure how that could be considered unduly close paraphrasing. The degree is called a "master's degree in counseling and guidance." It would be inappropriate to call it anything else. Cbl62 (talk) 01:33, 12 July 2013 (UTC)

You have a point. I have crossed that out. SL93 (talk) 01:34, 12 July 2013 (UTC)

Thanks, SL. I've added the in-line citation and completed the QPQ. Cbl62 (talk) 01:46, 12 July 2013 (UTC)

This now meets DYK criteria. SL93 (talk) 01:47, 12 July 2013 (UTC)