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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:40, 11 August 2017 (UTC)

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Golden Tea Room[edit]

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Golden Tea Room
Golden Tea Room

Created/expanded by Gryffindor (talk). Self-nominated at 16:32, 19 July 2017 (UTC).

@Epicgenius: Reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Jamaica High School. Gryffindor (talk) 15:13, 25 July 2017 (UTC)
  • @Gryffindor: I will review this nomination. Unfortunately, this DYK seems to be ineligible. It doesn't seem to be created in the last week (it was created in 2003); or expanded fivefold in the last 30 days (this article has not been expanded fivefold since 2003). It is not a recent Good Article, which is the only other way this DYK could pass, so I will have to fail this nomination. epicgenius (talk) 18:47, 19 July 2017 (UTC) My bad. disregard.
  • It looks there was just an error in the nomination. Golden Tea Room was created today. SL93 (talk) 18:53, 19 July 2017 (UTC)
@Epicgenius: I am confused as well, what do you mean with 2003? It was created in the last 24 hours. Gryffindor (talk) 18:59, 19 July 2017 (UTC)
  • @SL93: Thanks for pointing out the error. When I looked at ALT0, there was no bolded link, and no link at all to the article in question, for that matter. I'll do a re-review. epicgenius (talk) 19:00, 19 July 2017 (UTC)
  • @Gryffindor: Sorry for the confusion. First of all, for hook ALT0, you need to actually include a link to Golden Tea Room. I will write a review shortly. epicgenius (talk) 19:01, 19 July 2017 (UTC) Oops, it was already included. It wasn't bolded so I skipped the fact that the link is at the end. So I bolded the link and proposed ALT2. I probably need to stop watching Netflix while editing. epicgenius (talk) 19:12, 19 July 2017 (UTC)
@Epicgenius: No worries. I just noticed it as well and corrected it. Thank you. Gryffindor (talk) 19:02, 19 July 2017 (UTC)
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: epicgenius (talk) 19:07, 19 July 2017 (UTC)

So, in place of hook 0 I also suggest this hook. This hook actually contains your article more prominently.
I like your hook, it sounds better. Gryffindor (talk) 19:10, 19 July 2017 (UTC)
Good. I think ALT2 would be best once I finish this review. In the meantime, you need a QPQ since you have more than 5 DYK credits already. epicgenius (talk) 19:12, 19 July 2017 (UTC)
@Epicgenius: would you please review the newest edits? Is there also a copy-editor available that can polish it up more? Thank you. Gryffindor (talk) 15:50, 20 July 2017 (UTC)
@Gryffindor: Sure. I have updated the review, and now all that is needed is your QPQ. Regarding your copy edit question, I guess you can make a request at WP:GOCE, but that takes some time so ask on WT:DYK if you want someone to look it over quickly. I see you have already made a GOCE request. epicgenius (talk) 18:11, 20 July 2017 (UTC)
@Gryffindor: I like the edits you've made to the proposed hook. All you have to do is add your QPQ credit to this nomination (just make a note under your crossed-out ALT1 like "Reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Jamaica High School") and I can pass it. epicgenius (talk) 17:48, 24 July 2017 (UTC)
This nomination is good to go. epicgenius (talk) 15:41, 25 July 2017 (UTC)
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