Template:Did you know nominations/Hinatuan Enchanted River

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The result was: promoted by Victuallers (talk) 17:29, 29 April 2015 (UTC)

Hinatuan Enchanted River[edit]

The eye of the Hinatuan Enchanted River which is 35m deep excluding the depth of its underground river

  • ... that the Hinatuan Enchanted River (pictured) is a hot spring, a lagoon, and a river all at the same time; and is mildly salty due to its flow reversal during high tide?

5x expanded by Schadow1 (talk). Self nominated at 19:55, 13 March 2015 (UTC).

  • A good tenfold, but the minimum requirement is 1,500 characters/bytes in prose. Also, some sentences need inline citations. George Ho (talk) 21:06, 18 March 2015 (UTC)
  • Current revision is 1,413 bytes, eighty-seven bytes short of fifteen-hundred-bytes minimum requirement. George Ho (talk) 21:09, 18 March 2015 (UTC)
  • "actually a body of water that is" trimmed from hook. Edwardx (talk) 22:11, 18 March 2015 (UTC)
Expanded exploration details with additional new content and citations. Now over 2,000 bytes. Schadow1 (talk) 12:42, 19 March 2015 (UTC)
  • Unsure about needing more references, but let's see what another reviewer has to say. George Ho (talk) 18:54, 19 March 2015 (UTC)
  • I added a sentence from one of article sources about a March 20-24 mapping and assessment of the ecosystem. Schadow1, if nobody has passed this for review at the end of that assessment, might be worth adding the details to the article. The image you have provided for this would be terrific with a lead hook. — Maile (talk) 14:40, 21 March 2015 (UTC)
  • I've added more cites to the article. --Lenticel (talk) 01:28, 25 March 2015 (UTC)
  • Full review needed now that article is more than long enough and has additional citations. BlueMoonset (talk) 23:52, 18 April 2015 (UTC)
  • I'm new to reviewing, but this page seems fine to me: written with a neutral point of view, sources have inline citations, no close paraphrasing detected. SojoQ (talk) 00:23, 27 April 2015 (UTC)