Template:Did you know nominations/Rich Strike

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 21:59, 7 June 2022 (UTC)

Rich Strike

Created by Sammi Brie (talk), Jlvsclrk (talk), and Pennsylvania2 (talk). Nominated by Sammi Brie (talk) at 22:39, 8 May 2022 (UTC).

  • I think the best hook would be the original hook, but for it I would suggest revising it to mention that it was the winner of the race. Simply saying that the horse was a last minute entry IMO wouldn't have been that interesting or unusual without the context of the horse going on to win. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 05:59, 19 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Article was new and long enough, free from close paraphrasing, and with all hooks cited inline. My preferred hook is ALT0a; it is cited inline and mentioned in the article, I am assuming good faith for the sources as they are paywalled for me. My only concern is the word "deadline"; it's a bit vague so maybe it should be specified that the "deadline" being referred to here was the entry deadline. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:30, 20 May 2022 (UTC)
ALT0b: ... that 2022 Kentucky Derby winner Rich Strike was drawn into the field just minutes before the entry deadline?
Thank you! Approving ALT0b only. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 02:01, 21 May 2022 (UTC)