Template:Did you know nominations/Sonic Colors
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:21, 13 November 2017 (UTC)
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Sonic Colors[edit]
- ... that the video game Sonic Colors was designed to appeal to a wide demographic, specifically children and fans of the Super Mario series? Source: Sonic Team Talks Sonic Colours - IGN
- Comment: Feel free to suggest alt hooks.
Improved to Good Article status by TheJoebro64 (talk). Self-nominated at 23:28, 24 October 2017 (UTC).
- Comment: you need to clarify the hook for a global audience, as not everyone will be familiar with Super Mario or Sonic. Perhaps modify it as "...that the video game Sonic Colors...". Mindmatrix 22:44, 25 October 2017 (UTC)
- @Mindmatrix, Done. JOEBRO64 01:01, 28 October 2017 (UTC)
@TheJoebro64: This newly promoted GA is long enough and nominated soon enough. The article is neutral and the hook has several inline citations. However none of them uses the word "casual" as far as I can see, and you might consider substituting "wide" or "wider". Earwig's copyvio detector stated there was a 61.5% likelihood of a copyright violation of this site but I couldn't find any text there to compare it with, and I think a copyvio is unlikely. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:09, 2 November 2017 (UTC)
- @Cwmhiraeth: I've changed it to "a wide demographic". As for the copyvio, it's a YouTube video that the poster copied an older version of this page. JOEBRO64 19:27, 2 November 2017 (UTC)
- @Cwmhiraeth: Sorry, it said this wasn't sent. JOEBRO64 19:29, 2 November 2017 (UTC)
Thanks. This is now good to go. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:48, 2 November 2017 (UTC)
