Template:Did you know nominations/Washington Hall (hotel)

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:38, 15 March 2020 (UTC)

Washington Hall (hotel)

5x expanded by JJonahJackalope (talk). Self-nominated at 20:52, 25 February 2020 (UTC).

  • New enough and long enough (just barely a 5X expansion). Multiple citations in every paragraph, within all policy. Nom's 4th DYK, so QPQ not needed. The hook is short enough, but falls a little flat. There is not much to go on in this short article, but working in "burning of Atlanta" or "scorched earth" instead of just "Battle of Atlanta" might make it more interesting. Can you propose an alternate hook? MB 02:47, 26 February 2020 (UTC)
  • Added alternate hook that incorporates more from the article, including General Sherman and the scorched earth policy. JJonahJackalope (talk) 04:54, 26 February 2020 (UTC)
ALT1 is much more interesting, within length, properly cited. Good to go with ALT1. MB 03:21, 2 March 2020 (UTC)