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For the Innamorati page I would like to change it from being only about the Italian Renaissance period of Commedia dell'Arte, to an understanding of Commedia Dell'Arte that goes throughout history. I'm going to do this because all forms of theatre are living and changing forms, as well as the fact that Commedia dell'Arte is still a style of theatre performed today. There are a few sentences that I think are not correct, or only partially correct. I feel like some of the things said in this sound like opinions. perhaps it's the style that they are written in, but I'd like it to sound a little more formal. I think the explanations on how the lovers move are only partially correct, as well as the purpose for the lovers.
Other aspects I would like to include are: Costume, movement, speech, psychology, voice and speech.