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Tap, rack, bang
I think the explanation could be clearer since it still uses lingo, diagrams/photos could help and it could link another method to clear a jam for the people who need to clear their weapon.
Pull tab
More information could be added and information could be expanded upon. Also, photos are needed.
Clowns Gallery-Museum
More information could be added. The added information could be organized and photos could be added.
Hand wrap
I think this just needs general editing for clarity and to organize the information.
Military history of Georgia
This one seems super casual and written the way someone speaks. There are long run-on sentences that are confusing and hard to read.
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