User:Japhethtm

This user is a student editor in Wikipedia:Wiki_Ed/University_of_Maryland/INST201-0101_Introduction_to_Information_Science_(FALL_2017).
Student assignments should always be carried out using a course page set up by the instructor. It is usually best to develop assignments in your sandbox. After evaluation, the additions may go on to become a Wikipedia article or be published in an existing article.

Greetings, Japhethtm

I have reverted both of the edits you made for your class assignment:

The material on Red Mesa high school was first edited to correct the error of naming it "Red Sea High School", then I realized that Red Mesa was already cited in the opening paragraph of the subsection, so I deleted your sentence entirely. Perhaps the content from you source could be added to the current content.
I reverted the addition to the section Name change as a business decision because it is speculation regarding Snyder's motives that is not directly supported by the citation, which is WP:OR.

While I appreciate the effort to contribute to this article, a great deal of work was done to bring it up to GA quality given the controversial and complex nature of the topic, including its being >100k in size, which would ordinarily require removal of content to avoid "Too long, didn't read".

WriterArtistDC (talk) 11:15, 24 September 2017 (UTC)