User:Yasminzand
1) I would like to edit Indian Creek (Niangua River) because there is history and current information about the river that no one has stated in the article.
2) I would also like to edit Tajikistan women's national volleyball team because there is no information about the women on the national volleyball team which can easily be found on their website.
3) lastly, I would like to edit The Harvest (1992 novel) because the article does no more than state the summary of the book, and doesn't address any key points or characters in the article
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Option 1 sounds promising, assuming you have reliable sources - please review Wikipedia's guidelines. You are welcome to move forward drafting the article. Erickaakcire (talk) 15:55, 28 September 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review[edit]
Hi, I just read your draft for your article. I compared it the current wiki and I think the performing page did need more information, so I'm glad you chose to build upon it. I have a few suggestions to help too:
- Most importantly,there's a lot of information but you didn't cite where you got it. I know you said it's coming from your school's art website, so maybe you can add some inline citations to back it up. This is essential in case someone wants to learn more about the choral groups in the school, they'll know exactly where to look.
- Also, I like that you listed choral music groups and explained them because that makes things easier to read than just regular paragrpahs. In order to make it clearer perhaps you can bullet/number the list.
- I would also suggest you add another source other than just your school's page to ensure balance and variety in your article.
- Lastly, the addition of internal (from wikipedia) and external links can be very useful in your article. They help to define/further explain keywords that you use in your article. For example, I would add internal links to the musical genres. Internal and external links make Wikipedia more navigatable.
<nowiki>Overall I think you did a really good job :)! ArianaDuford (talk) 18:38, 11 October 2016 (UTC)
Hi Ariana,
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate the feedback. To follow up, I will cite the website from my high school's art page in the text. I'll also make the descriptions of the choral groups in a bullet form so the reader can easily follow and navigate the information. Lastly, I'll definitely take some other links to help describe keywords so the reader can really understand the context. I can't find another source other than my schools website, which I know isn't good, but we just don't have any other reviews or information about the groups in other places. As a public school, or music groups don't receive as much attention as, let's say the high school football team.
Thank you again for the review!
Yasmin Zand