User talk:Ahiredits
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Hello, Ahiredits, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:34, 23 January 2018 (UTC)
Peer Review & Copy Edit Assignment[edit]
Hi Himanshi, it's Isha. I see that a lot of your draft for your article is about what you plan on doing versus actual drafted paragraphs or sentences that can be added. That's fine, but I definitely can see that you are on track for some good, academic, and non-biased additions to the article. I definitely think that it will be beneficial to delve into the real definition of 'delegative democracy' and how it is a combination of both direct and representative democracy. Additionally, I think that mentioning blockchain will help to add in more current information (just make sure that the sources are good and follow the guidelines, as many sources as of now may just be unverified blogs, etc.). Definitely make sure to fix the uncited information, whether by finding the source, removing that sentence/portion, etc. Good job so far!! Isha9 (talk) 07:14, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
Hey Himanshi, this is Isha Ajmera. You have made some solid progress in outlining what you will be working on and I think getting unbiased strong references should be your priority now. there is a lot of noise around blockchain and cryptocurrency right now so ensure to verify your sources! Overall I think you are on a well laid out path, great work! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Theretiredgymnast (talk • contribs) 06:28, 24 March 2018 (UTC)