User talk:AlanNavai
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Hello, AlanNavai, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:41, 12 February 2019 (UTC)
Peer Review Response[edit]
Hey Alan!!!
Thanks for peer reviewing my article, i'll take all your feedback into consideration. The reason I do not have a lead section is I am only editing a portion of the pocket pets article, specifically the history section. However, I suppose it would not be a bad idea to create some sort of lead section dedicated to the history section. I did not want to completely butcher or change the existing structure for the already existing pocket pets page; however, considering how similar a lot of these pets are it is not a bad idea to group them into subsections. Thanks for your feedback.
Nathan MarketBoiCYM (talk) 22:45, 31 March 2019 (UTC)
Instructor Feedback[edit]
You've contributed a lot of content to Nimbus Fish Hatchery, nice work! Here are some suggestions to make sure you get a good final grade:
1. You need to provide links to other wikipedia articles on the topics you cover, e.g. San Pablo Bay. Do the training on linking and go through all your text to provide links.
2. A chart of population data would be great, including releases, hatchery returns and wild returns.
3. Check spelling and grammar throughout.
--Julianfulton (talk) 21:01, 19 April 2019 (UTC)