User talk:Alpirc2017

This user is a student editor in University_of_Cincinnati_/English_2089_Intermediate_Composition__(Fall_) .

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Hello, Alpirc2017, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:26, 2 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review[edit]

The way you organized the "selections" section of this article makes it much easier to read and view. The formatting of looks professional and well done. To improve your edits, I would suggest adding a bit more depth to the subheadings. We also talked about adding to the "Expansion in the 21st Century" section if you have time. In the "wade Park" section, it talks about a bombing that happened in 1970. If you have time, you could also look into expanding that paragraph because it mainly talks about this in reference to a specific sculpture rather than as a significant event that happened there. Overall, I think the current wiki article is not bad and mainly needs expansion and organization in a few sections, which you are doing a good job of. Gabibleuel (talk) 17:56, 29 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]